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Soul belief questioned by ~Saurien-Soul:iconSaurien-Soul:

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I look to the sky for answers.
I think of whats past this sight.
After awhile, I realize that theres nothing.
Theres nothing past its fluffy exterior.
What is see, is all thats there.

Instead of looking for whats not there.
I should look for whats happening around me.
Not what might not be above me.

The prospect of god, lost to me long ago.
Burying my head in the sand, to unreasonably reason with what is happening around me.
Whats happening in this world, is nothing more than what it is.

I do not ask of people to question where their soul is. But to question what is happening outside.
©2007-2009 ~Saurien-Soul
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Author's Comments

Just a over analyzed, philosophical reminder of my unreligious ways, and what i think of religion. And how I hate people saying it's gods will. Some hints to the government.

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~EnvyKittens Jul 11, 2007, 11:06:57 PM
wow very nice.writing like this always makes me question my self and the things i do.thank you for posting this i truly do love it :D
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Mood: Optimism ~Saurien-Soul Jul 12, 2007, 9:03:48 AM
Why thank you! The more people that question things, the more answers that will come up.

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" i want to leave this life like my uncle did, peacefully in his sleep. Unlike the poor bastards that were in the car with him. "
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~EnvyKittens Jul 12, 2007, 3:20:05 PM
your very welcome^_^
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~Angels-Losing-Sleep Jul 12, 2007, 11:18:25 PM
Well --- I'm sure there is some hint to government conspiracy and such in here --- and you know what I think of that stuff, so other than this is well written, I can't say to much.

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"Every time I turn around, I fall in love and find my heart face down, and where it lands is where it should."
-Nickelback
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*megami-no-yorokobi Jul 13, 2007, 10:08:07 AM
Mmhmm. I'm in semi-agreeance with you. Though because I beleive that everything isn't what it seems, you can't only look around you. You have to look through what you see to see what is really behind it. Though then again this could be the quantum mechanics that I learnt last year in physics.
Though good writing, I quite like it. It makes you think a bit, which is always good.
Oh and you know. Down with the government!

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You can't see me! I'm a ninja!
Surfs up! Join the party!
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~Saurien-Soul Jul 13, 2007, 2:54:25 PM
Semi-agreeance is good. I just don't want people to believe everything people on the news or their government say. Especially when those people tell their kids not to believe everything they hear and see. Conspiracies are driven by people asking questions, and though I may be called crazy for questioning such things, nobody can call me stupid for it.

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" i want to leave this life like my uncle did, peacefully in his sleep. Unlike the poor bastards that were in the car with him. "
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*megami-no-yorokobi Jul 13, 2007, 8:58:05 PM
Exactly. Half the stuff on the news is BS anyways, because they always play up the bad stuff and never have anything about the good on there. Because you know, bad news sells.
Bah. Lots of people question this kinda stuff, and I think it's rather good too. Healthy and such.

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You can't see me! I'm a ninja!
Surfs up! Join the party!
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